the diagram below shows how a refrigerator works.
The presented diagram depicts different parts of
refrigerator
and how it works. Add an article
the refrigerator
This
system can be described as follows:
A refrigerator contains a capillary tube which is all around the system, a compressor and a condenser
. In addition
, when the condenser
push
high_pressure liquid Change the verb form
pushes
to
the capillary tube , Meanwhile, the evaporation of heat from food is proceeding Change preposition
into
in
Change preposition
to
refrigerate
and transfer to the liquid. So, warm low_prussure Replace the word
refrigeration
gas
flows to the compressor which can turns
it Change the verb form
turn
to
Change preposition
into
the
hot high-pressure Correct article usage
a
gas
. While
,
heat is transferred to Remove the comma
apply
atmosphere
. Add an article
the atmosphere
Moreover
, this
high-pressure gas
is continued
the cycle and Change the verb form
has continued
move
to Correct subject-verb agreement
moves
condenser
in order to keep the refrigerator cabin cool.
Add an article
the condenser
To sum up
, it can be said that the condenser
, compressor and evaporator are the most important components of the system. It can be observed that refrigerators are working with two state
of matter high-pressure liquid and high-pressure Change to a plural noun
states
gas
but with unsimilar temperatures.Submitted by javadsaady1992 on
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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