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There should be a complete ban for advertising. So that we can benefit from its negative effects. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Nowadays, advertising a product or service to attract more customers has been increasingly popular. Some people are in favour of a complete stop
on
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 commercials because of
its
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their
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 negative effects. I totally agree with
this
 notion and in the following paragraphs, I will support my opinion with the relevant examples.  
To begin
 with, a ban on promotion can save a lot of
money
 which can be used for the development of the nation.
For example
, political parties usually invest
money
 in banners, and
advertisements
 on television to obtain the votes of the public.
This
money
 should be used to build hospitals, schools and more places to serve people.
Therefore
,
this
 approach develops the standard of living.
Secondly
,
advertisements
 have very negative effects on young minds. There are numerous type of
advertisements
 on television, the internet and other social sites which distracts children from studying and the goals of their life.
In addition
, they waste the hard-earned
money
 of their parents on the products by watching their favourite role models
promotes
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 it.
On the other hand
, promotion can be beneficial to aware public about new products or services.
For instance
, a new product in the market cannot catch the eye of customers until it's been advertised.
Therefore
,
advertisements
 are needed in some cases to convey the message to the public.
To conclude
,
advertisements
 should be banned because of their negative effects on young minds and because it is a waste of
money
.
However
, it
also
 raises awareness. Personally, I believe the ban should be only on misleading promotions.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Pervasive
  • Consumerism
  • Unrealistic expectations
  • Manipulation
  • Information dissemination
  • Free media
  • Economic growth
  • Stricter regulations
  • Ethical guidelines
  • Consequences
  • Innovation
  • Nuanced position
  • Regulatory measures
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