You are taking a holiday in a place recommended by your local travel agent, you have had a wonderful time. You have promised to write to him and let him know what you think of his suggestion. Write a letter to your travel agent as promised, and let him know what you have been doing and what you are going to do before the end of the journey.

Dear Hari, You might remember that I had promised to write to you about what I think of the destination that you recommended for my vacation. I am having a great time here in
Kerala
. Every evening I go
for
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swimming in the nearby waterslide and I think it is much more fun in swimming in the natural waterslides than in the pool.
Food
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is excellent here and yesterday I tried the famous "Karimeen Pollichatu" and it was delicious. Local people are very cooperative and have reasonable knowledge
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English,
hence
communication is not an issue.
Kerala
is very popular for "Unity in Diversity", as it has
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mixture of different cultures. Tomorrow I am planning to visit
Kerala
Kalamandalam and
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there I will be watching festivals and art forms of
Kerala
like "Kathakali" and "Mohiniyattam",
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Afterwards I will visit the Thrissur district which is
also
known as the "Land Of
Poorams
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". I must state that your choice of the place for my vacation was excellent and when I return I will show you all the breathtaking photographs that I took and I will share my
overall
experience. Yours Sincerely, John
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