The chart below shows male and female fitness membership in Thailand between 1985 and 2015

The chart below shows male and female fitness membership in Thailand between 1985 and 2015
The bar chart illustrates the
number
of people joining
exercise
in Thailand over the period of 20
years
. In
overall
,
it is clear that
the figure for
males
taking part in
exercise
had a marginally upward trend,
while
a slight increase was seen in
females
.
In addition
, the
number
of citizen fitness member were the highest in 2010, compared to other
years
. On the one hand, physical activities that men participated in accounted for 2200, compared to women made up 1200. Over the next 5
years
, the figure for
males
joining
exercise
stood at 3800, two as much as that of
females
. 15
years
late witnessed a sharp decrease of 2000 in the
number
of
males
taking part in fitness,
whereas
females
fell slightly to 1600 before experiencing a shape rise of 1200.
On the other hand
, from 2005 to 2015 the
number
of
males
participating in
exercise
peaked at 5000 in 2010, which was followed by a decrease to 1000 in 2015.
Moreover
,
females
joining fitness
also
peaked at 2900 in 2010
,
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but later went down sharply by 9000.
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