Some people say that it is not possible to be happy without money, while others think that money does not guarantee happiness. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
Does
money
buy happiness or not? Use synonyms
This
has always been an interesting topic to discuss. The population is divided into two categories, Linking Words
firstly
the ones who believe Linking Words
money
gives happiness and is the ultimate luxury in Use synonyms
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whereas
the other category insists that it does not give you Linking Words
joy
.
Let us consider the first set of Use synonyms
people
who say "Wealth is directly proportional to one's happiness". I would like to quote an example of an acquaintance of mine who has been raised like a rich-spoilt brat. She feels that Use synonyms
money
can get you anything and everything, including a person's love which is said to be the most valuable thing to a person. To date she doesn't even know who's being fake towards her and neither does she care. Her obsession with wealth has made her forget the minute essences of Use synonyms
life
. Few Use synonyms
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are the average middle-class ones whose lives depend upon the income and Use synonyms
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they make, for them yes I do accept it is important and Use synonyms
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at the same time they do celebrate Linking Words
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.
The other half of the crowd says "Revenue does not assure the Use synonyms
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". I accept Use synonyms
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statement to a certain extent. Most folk who come under Linking Words
this
category are multi-millionaires, superstars, politicians etc. I would like to give an example of a South Korean boy band who have worked very hard and are rags to riches now, and are an inspiration to the community. They have reached every level of success, and have lots of riches, fame and everything they could ever ask for. Linking Words
However
, they do lack something Linking Words
that is
available to any common man i.e., privacy. They do not have something as basic as that and are stalked everywhere, they are continuously being monitored and targeted by crowds/media even for their slightest mistake. What is the point of having all the funds if it does not guarantee you a peaceful day and always have to be wary of your surroundings? Linking Words
This
happens to more than half of the influential Linking Words
people
on the planet. Apart from all of Use synonyms
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, you'll never know who's being true to you or trying to be pretentious. These are some of the issues which they face.
In conclusion, I would say funds are important as they are a necessity, but for ,me Linking Words
that is
not the only source of Linking Words
joy
. But Use synonyms
people
these days started giving more importance to Use synonyms
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and forgetting all the little things that give us true Use synonyms
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and meaning in Use synonyms
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