Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely. Discuss both views and give your oponion.

Nowadays, scientific research, business, and

academic

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the academic

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word

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world

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have developed and getting

advance

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each time. In spite of

those improvement

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that improvement

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, there is debate

weather

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whether

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the

information

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should be shared freely or not. In my opinion,

spread

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the

information

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as wide as it can be is more important since it can help enhance the quality of life through science, business, and

academic

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academics

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by avoiding the previous

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.

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, some people believe that

informations

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information

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are too valuable to share freely because they had found the

information

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through

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in

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expensive

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an expensive

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way. They need money to

fulfill

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fulfil

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all of the funding that they had given.

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, a

scientist

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conduct

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an expensive experiment and

the

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apply

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tend to publish it with restricted access.

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will lead

public

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to public

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pay to open that paper, so from

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point

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the

scientist

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will gain more money and even get the experiment’s money back. But, to avoid large

outcome

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outcomes

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, they can join the fully funded research.

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, quality of life will become better because people learn from previous experiences and take other actions to prevent

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mistake

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. From sources like journals, people can correct the

last

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problems and find the solution which

lead

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leads

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to new

better

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and better

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invention.

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,

the

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apply

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scientist

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who

study

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studies

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on fermentation process

publish

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publishes

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all the data,

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mistake

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mistakes

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, and materials from

previous

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the previous

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experiment

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experiments

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.

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the other

scientist

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who

want

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to study about

similar

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the similar

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subject will learn from that journal and can prevent the

mistake

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which done by the first

scientist

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.

To conclude

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, I’m on the side where

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should be shared freely because there are many ways to conduct fully funded research, business, and academic which will lead to gain

better

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a better

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life through innovation