Some people think that the most important thing about being rich is it gives a person the opportunity to help other people. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In today’s world, there is a great chase towards
. Many
spend their entire life trying to accomplish financial security in order to provide themself with luxurious items.
others state the benefit of having
is being able to live a comfortable life, In my belief, the most important thing about being rich is having the privilege to help others. In
essay, I will
explain my opinion. Having rich
helping individuals can help with the world's
accomplishments. There are many children whose fortune is not in their favour, since their parents can't afford their kid’s education, they are not able to go to school and eventually have a promising job.
, there is a shortage of
doctors, lawyers and scientists, which is affecting the world’s
inventions in a negative way. Letting young children charity in order for them to receive knowledge will directly impact the globe's
developments in science, technology and more.
For example
, in 2005, a rich Israeli businessman decided to donate
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new school for poor children in Kenya, Africa. Thanks to the education that they received, Many students from that Kenyan school succeeded to apply to impressive universities, which eventually help them have successful careers and donate to
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, Having the opportunity to donate to others is beneficial for the local environment. Many
nowadays can't seem to find a job,
as a result
, they find themselves living on the streets, creating a decrease in apartment prices next to homeless
living next to it. Getting donations from wealthy ones will not only help clean the streets and make the environment a better place but
upward the price of different homes throughout a certain country, making the country a wealthier place.
For instance
, having a clean and safe neighbourhood free of homeless
is an important consideration before purchasing a house,
the price of a certain home is higher.
As a result
, the country is gaining a greater amount of
. In conclusion,
it is true that having a huge amount of
gives you the privilege of treating yourself and your loved ones, in my view, it is more important to spend
on helping other
who need that help, based on the
developments and economical reasons.
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