The graph below shows the qatari import totals( in tons) for several types of vegetables from 1980 to 2020.

The graph below shows the qatari import totals( in tons) for several types of vegetables from 1980 to 2020.
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The given three pie graphs represent the tonnages of Qatari
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for five types of vegetables between the 40
years
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of period.
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the least significant good was peas and increased slightly over time.
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, spinach
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dropped remarkably from 1980 to 2020. The vast majority of imported goods increased
at the end
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of 40
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, except spinach which was started at 500
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import
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in Qatari in 1980. After two decades later decreased by 50
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, and eventually dropped to 350
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of imports a year in 2020. The total drop
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spinach imports was %30 per cent during the period of 40
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.
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, garlic and ginger imports increased by 100
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after 40
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and reached 400 and 300
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respectively.
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, garlic became the most important vegetable which was imported to Qatari in 2020. Ginger
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peaked at 310 in 2000, but generally increased by only 10
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a year over 40
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. The
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of peas increased slightly to 170
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per year in 2020.
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