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The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. » Write at least 150 words.

The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. » Write at least 150 words.
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The two maps given depict information about the difference in an
island
 after the construction of new amenities for tourism means.
Overall
, it can be seen that the place
are
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 predicted to be more residential with different facilities. We can
also
 see that trees are expected to remain in the same place there is no sign of deforestation
in
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on
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 the map of the
island
's future.
Initially
, several accommodations are expected to be constructed on the
island
 forming a type of roundabout.
Moreover
, a pier will be set up in order to give access for tourists to boats and ships visiting the
island
. ,
,
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Finally
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 a restaurant and reception building
are
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is
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 predicted to be developed in the centre of the
island
 in order to provide food and other services for tourists. To summarize, it is possible to confirm that the
island
 will be less inhabited with a myriad of human-made buildings constructed in the future.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words island with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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