Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary schools rather than secondary school. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?
It is believed by some experts that would be more effective for pupils to learn a new
language
at primary school. Even though there are significant benefits regarding the process
of learning a foreign language
by children
, there are some drawbacks to consider.
On the one hand, one benefit regarding the process
of learning and storing a myriad of information is that pupils are able to perform such
matter faster than other secondary school students, as in this
age development their brains are enabled to understand multiple topics at the same time. Consequently
, children
will show quick learning of a new language
even if it presents several grammatical rules and challenges. For instance
, it is estimated that in the United Kington 6 out of 10 primary schools offer Spanish as a second language
for their students in order to improve their ability language
skills, which results in more effective communication in the future once children
may probably travel or work in a Spanish country place.
On the other hand
, one drawback related to learning a different language
may be a possible sense of being overwhelmed created after such
exposition, because children
will present a feeling of frustration about the enormous quantity of language
rules learned earlier in their lives. As a consequence
, they will probably achieve a sense of aversion to a new language
. For example
, it is known that for children
under, 5 the process
of learning a foreign language
needs to be made no longer than 2 hours per week, more than that will lead to an increase of
distraction and easy frustration by them.
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To conclude
, even though learning a new language
can be fast and extremely useful for pupils, an over-exposition can be harmful to their knowledge process
. Ideally, such
a choice needs to be made by each parent as they know about their pupil's personality and learning difficulties.Submitted by Nayara (rhuanbr36) on
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