You had a minor accident at work, and you got injured. According to the company rules, you must report it to your manager in writing. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter describe what happened and your injury; explain what the result of the accident was; suggest a way to avoid similar accidents in the future.

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Dear Mrs Handerson

This

is Mhasa Hassani from the accounting department with employee number z27249. I am writing

this

letter to inform you of a little accident that happened to me 2 days ago on 25th March

while

I was using the stairs. In the morning that day, I was walking down the stairs when I slipped and fell over. That happened

due to

the wet and slippery condition of them because they have been cleaned only a few minutes ago. I have bruises on my both legs and swollen wrist which does not allow me to take a pen or write something for a few days.

This

company has hundreds of employees who communicate through the floors regularly and it can be hazardous if we are not careful.

Therefore

I want to suggest that cleaners can do the cleanings in the evening when everyone leaves so no one gets hurt

this

way anymore. Thank you Mahsa

Submitted by mahsa_hasanikousha on Fri May 26 2023

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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4Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

6 paragraphs

157 words

7.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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