You want to hold a surprise party for a friend who is visiting his home town after a long time from a foreign country. Write a letter to a common friend asking for his help in organizing the party and in your letter: Write the reasons for organizing the party Describe when, where and how you would be organizing the party Ask your friend to meet you in person for further discussions

#surprise #party #friend #home #town #time #country #person #discussions

Dear Navid, I just heard that Majid will be in the city tomorrow. Since we haven't gathered together for almost three years, I think it would be great, if we hold a surprise party. In

this

way, we can have fun and talk about the old days. As Majid will probably be tired after a long trip, let's organise a party for the next Friday evening. I think the best place would be your building's roof as it has a wonderful view. You just ask him to come over, and when he is there we shout surprise! He may be stunned by the plan.

Lastly

, tomorrow I want to go to the city for some shopping. If you are available, we could have coffee in the Old Man coffee place in order to discuss the details of our plan. So, let me know in case you have spare time for the meeting. Best regards, Amir

Submitted by amirghas92 on Fri May 26 2023

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Do you want to check your IELTS essays?

Submit unlimited essays, letters and charts. Sign up right now and start improving your writing skills.

2Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

6 paragraphs

155 words

9.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

🚀 Prepare for IELTS writing section today!

Unlimited Task 1 checks
Get all the feedback you need to keep improving your charts and letters.
Unlimited Task 2 checks
Practice and perfect your skills with essays.
Personalized suggestions
Know how to boost your score.
Detailed mistakes analysis
Get instant feedback. Spot every mistake.
Topic ideas generator
Get topic-specific ideas to enhance your writing.
Vocabulary helper
Get the right words for any topic.
Progress tracking
Track your writing improvements.

What to do next:

Look at other essays:

4.5
band
Nowadays many people complain that they have difficulties getting enough sleep. What problems can lack of sleep cause? What can be done about leg of sleep?
It is undeniable that sleep plays an indispensable role in individual's life.It is vehemently contended by few sections of society thatin this contemporary era, numerous masses are going through sleep issues which has detrimental impacts on their body. This essay intends to cast light on contributing factors and remedial measures to put a halt on it. Further, I will explicate about the matter in the subsequent paragraphs.
4
band
The best way to solve the traffic and transportation problem is to encourage people to live in cities rather than suburbs or countryside. What are the effects of rapid population growth in the city? How can the quality of life city dwellers be maintain?
The main problem that most of the big cities faced is congested, then solution to solved this is advice the citizens live on suburbs or rural area. In this essay, i will examine the effects that contribute towards population explosion in the city if this method applied and propose some recommendation to keep the life quality of the resident.
4.5
band
Many people today do not feel safe either at home or when they are out. What are the causes? What are the solutions?
In Taiwan our public security was great in the past, but nowadays it is not as good as in previous years, and some citizens feel that society is neither safe at home or outdoors. This essay will discuss what are some of the possible causes and offer possible solutions.
5.5
band
Some people think that qualities a person needs to become a successful in today's world cannot be learned at university To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In this ambitious universe, with all the current technology, a lot believe that to be wealthy in life you have to finish university and work hard, while others believe that it is not a must nowadays. While both views have merit, I believe that to be successful a person should practice and learn regardless of the college studies.
5
band
Your parents will be celebrating their 50th anniversary next month. You are planning a big celebration, but you are not sure how to make the occasion really memorable. But you have a friend who can help.
Dear Julia,

Nowadays many people complain that they have difficulties getting enough sleep. What problems can lack of sleep cause? What can be done about leg of sleep?

The best way to solve the traffic and transportation problem is to encourage people to live in cities rather than suburbs or countryside. What are the effects of rapid population growth in the city? How can the quality of life city dwellers be maintain?

Many people today do not feel safe either at home or when they are out. What are the causes? What are the solutions?

Some people think that qualities a person needs to become a successful in today's world cannot be learned at university To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Your parents will be celebrating their 50th anniversary next month. You are planning a big celebration, but you are not sure how to make the occasion really memorable. But you have a friend who can help.