The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country betewwn 1920 and 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparision where relevant.
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The first graph illustrates the variation
of
home appliances ownership Change preposition
in
percentage
. Use synonyms
While
, the second one, shows the evolution of Linking Words
hours
dedicated by people to housework, both in one country from 1920 to 2019.
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Overall
, the Linking Words
percentage
of households with electrical appliances had a significant growth between 1920 and 2019. Use synonyms
In contrast
to the Linking Words
hours
of housework per week per household, which had a noticeable decrease during the same period of time.
On the one hand, the Use synonyms
percentage
of houses with refrigerators had raised from 0% in 1920 to 100% by 1980. Use synonyms
On the other hand
, the Linking Words
percentage
of households with vacuum cleaners had a noticeable rise of 70% from 1920 to 2000. Use synonyms
Furthermore
, the Linking Words
percentage
of both electrical appliances remained steady at 100% after reaching it.
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Moreover
, the Linking Words
percentage
of housework activities, which include, washing clothes, preparing meals and cleaning, had a dramatic drop between 1920 to 1960 from 50 Use synonyms
hours
per week to 20 Use synonyms
hours
. Use synonyms
While
from 1960 to 2019 fell slightly until 10 Linking Words
hours
.Use synonyms
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