The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country betewwn 1920 and 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparision where relevant.

The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country betewwn 1920 and 2019.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparision where relevant.
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The first graph illustrates the variation
of
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home appliances ownership
percentage
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.
While
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, the second one, shows the evolution of
hours
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dedicated by people to housework, both in one country from 1920 to 2019.
Overall
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, the
percentage
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of households with electrical appliances had a significant growth between 1920 and 2019.
In contrast
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to the
hours
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of housework per week per household, which had a noticeable decrease during the same period of time. On the one hand, the
percentage
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of houses with refrigerators had raised from 0% in 1920 to 100% by 1980.
On the other hand
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, the
percentage
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of households with vacuum cleaners had a noticeable rise of 70% from 1920 to 2000.
Furthermore
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, the
percentage
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of both electrical appliances remained steady at 100% after reaching it.
Moreover
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, the
percentage
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of housework activities, which include, washing clothes, preparing meals and cleaning, had a dramatic drop between 1920 to 1960 from 50
hours
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per week to 20
hours
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.
While
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from 1960 to 2019 fell slightly until 10
hours
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.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words percentage, hours with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 6 times.
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