Popular events like the football World Cup and other international sporting occasions are essential in easing international tensions and releasing patriotic emotions in a safe way. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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events are crucial in order to improve international relationships and exude patriotic feelings in a healthy manner is one of the recurrently discussed matters nowadays. It is indubitable that sporting occasions

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as the football World Cup

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become widespread in recent times.

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, there are opposing beliefs regarding the

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of them.

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essay will take both

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of

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into consideration and conclude. On the one hand, it is a frequently held consensus that viewing sports programmes is a method of releasing

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emotions in a safe way. Watching these events can lead to a spark of adrenaline within people. By rooting for their team of choice, the general public may feel a weight off their shoulders. A good case in point is the fact that shouting is a superb method of exuding

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anger and negativity. Some may consider it as a form of therapy. Studies recommend

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into a pillow

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of lashing out

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someone. The same logic can be applied

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enjoyers watch a match of their preferred game.

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, sporting events might derive

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a

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of cultures. Since most sports consist of two opposite teams, there is a division and bias between the fandom.

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has grave consequences. Take

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the time the capital city of Spain was trashed by the French locals because the team "Barcelona" was victorious in a football game. Ultimately,

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resulted in a puny altercation

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the two nationalities.

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by taking everything into account, sporting occasions have both pros and cons. If human beings become more tolerant towards the idea

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something could happen not in their favour, I concur with the opinion that sporting organizations have a major merit for society.