The charts below show the number of Japanese tourists travelling abroad between 1985 and 1995 and Australia's share of the Japanese tourist market.

The charts below show the number of Japanese tourists travelling abroad between 1985 and 1995 and Australia's share of the Japanese tourist market.
The share of
Japanese
travellers visiting countries abroad during a
10 year
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period and Australia's figure
of
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the
Japanese
tourist market
is
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conveyed in the presented charts.
Overall
, it could be noticed that both
Japanese
tourists around the globe and Australia's market grew rapidly throughout the years. The first graph shows the increase
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Japanese
individuals visiting other countries. In 1985, the number was approximately 4,5%, meaning travel had not been the most popular back in the day.
On the other hand
, in 1995, it surged to 15%, which is more than 10% growth in percentage.
However
, the uproar was not always steady. During 1990, the proportion was 11%.
Although
, after a year, it experienced a 1% downgrade. As the second chart suggests, Australia's market had a major development. Getting into the details, it is worth noticing that the lowest number was below 85%, but the highest was around 94%
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  • tourist market
  • overseas travel
  • tourism industry
  • international campaigns
  • economic prosperity
  • travel preferences
  • market share
  • fluctuations
  • peak
  • trend
  • attracting
  • destination
  • variability
  • contributing factors
  • currency exchange rates
  • speculate
  • tourism policies
  • competitive markets
  • popularity
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