The maps below show changes that took place in Youngsville in New Zealand over a 25-year period from 1980 to 2005.

The maps below show changes that took place in Youngsville in New Zealand over a 25-year period from 1980 to 2005.
The map gives
the
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information about the landscape changes
occurred
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in Youngsville in New Zealand in the span of 25 years from 1980 to 2005. From an
overall
perspective, it can be seen that a comparison of the two maps reveals the changes from a largely rural to a mainly urban landscape. It is
cleared
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that the majority of landed houses and greeneries were removed to make way for commercial and industrial buildings
such
as skyscrapers, warehouses and factories throughout the 25-year period. In 1980, the town was
a
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much greener with a large number of individual houses and trees
whereas
during the next 25 years, the town witnessed a number of dramatic changes. All of the
tress
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south of the
River
Alanah were chopped down, with all of the houses along the railway line were pulled down and replaced by skyscrapers.
Moreover
, a new industrial district like factories and warehouses
were sprang
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up near
school
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and
airport
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the airport
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. Only a few trees to the north of the
river
remained. The woodland was cleared to make space for a park, a golf course and car parking amenities.
Further
developments were the construction of a stadium near the
north-east
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of the lake and a new stretch of railway from the
river
running directly north. A marina was
also
built at the mouth of the
river
.
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