You will be celebrating your son's 6 th birthday next week. you want to invite one of your colleagues to attend the birthday party.Write an invitation letter to this colleague.In your letter , invite your colleague to your son's birthday party,give details of the party and it's date and time , say how happy you and your family would be to have him/ her at the party.
Dear Theresa,
I hope
this
letter finds you well and in good health. I know you are swamped, so I'll be brief. I am writing this
letter to invite you to my son's 6th birthday party which is next week. This
will be our first huge party in our new house. Also
, my parents visited this
time so we want to celebrate this
occasion in their presence.
When I say huge, I really mean it. We are hosting over 100 guests including kids and adults who will be provided with tasty food, drinks (cocktails and mocktails) and fun games. Some games are designed to be played by older ones. Moreover
, the food includes vegan and dairy-free options. I almost forgot to mention the main attraction for children which is the chocolate fountain which I am sure your daughter will love. This
event is celebrated on the 24th of this
month.
Although
you are busy with work, I'd love it if you can make it to this
event. It would not only make me and my husband happy but also
my parents. It's almost been 5 years since we saw you so I would be delighted to meet you.
Looking forward to seeing you.
With Love,
Sasha.Submitted by praneeth2094 on
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Task Achievement
You've provided a clear and engaging invitation with all necessary details about your son's birthday party. It would enhance the letter if you included the exact time of the party, not just the date, to ensure all information is complete for the recipient.
Coherence and Cohesion
Consider organizing details more clearly into paragraphs, dedicating specific paragraphs to specific types of information, such as party details in one paragraph and your personal message in another. This would even further improve clarity.
Greeting and Closing
Your opening and closing salutations are warm and appropriate, which sets a lovely tone for the letter.
Suitable Writing Tone
You've successfully conveyed a sense of excitement and warmth, inviting your colleague in a way that makes them feel genuinely wanted at the event.
The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,