Some people think that students in single-sex schools perform better academically. Others, however, believe that mixed schools provide children with better scoail skills for adult life. Discussboth views and give your opinion.
Academics
and social skills
plays
an immense role in the life of every individual. Change the verb form
play
While
a group of traditionalist claims that children score much better in their studies only if, they will pursue their learning in a single-sex education
institute, another group of people presumes that, youth learns better communication and social skills
which will benefit them in future only when if
they will complete their academic at mixed Correct word choice
apply
schools
. In my opinion, if both
sexes will study together then
it will promote equality among them, they will learn better communication skills
and will also
get a chance to explore multiple fields of interest.
To commence with, equality in the upcoming generation plays a significant role to make a better society, if the students
of both
gender
pursue their Change to a plural noun
genders
education
sitting equal to each other, then
it will promotes
equality, earlier girls were not allowed to do the job in Army but now Change the verb form
promote
both
men and women get trained in the same education
center
. Change the spelling
centre
Moreover
, both
gender
will respect each other and learn communication skills
and in these institutions
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,institutions
students
explore more carrier opportunities. Usually
females prefer to be makeup Add a comma
,Usually
artist
rather than boys but now Fix the agreement mistake
artists
their
are Replace the word
there
excessive
number of males working as Change the article
an excessive
the excessive
a
make-up Correct article usage
apply
artists
in Bollywood and Hollywood.
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artist
Thus
, the benefits of pursuing education
in mixed schools
are even more significant than the single-sex schools
.
However
, it is an undeniable fact that opposite sex-attract each other, which can become a major distraction for students
who are studying in mixed-gender
education
institutions, good scores in academics
helps
in building Correct subject-verb agreement
help
better
future, but sometimes Correct article usage
a better
students
get distracted from their studies, becuase
at the early age level of hormones increase Correct your spelling
because
due to
which even a small distraction can deviate a student from his path. Therefore
, early education
of children should be completed in the single-sex school.
In an
nutshell, every aspect has its pros and cons. Change the article
a
Although
, pursuing education
from single
Add a hyphen
single-gender
gender
schools
definitely protects from
distraction which helps them in Correct pronoun usage
them from
academics
but i
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I
bieleve
that rather than Correct your spelling
believe
academics
, skills
play an
significant role in building a better Change the article
a
for
future, Change preposition
apply
therefore
students
who prefer to study in mixed
Add a hyphen
mixed-gender
gender
institutions are more skilled and they respect both
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