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Some people think that students in single-sex schools perform better academically. Others, however, believe that mixed schools provide children with better scoail skills for adult life. Discussboth views and give your opinion.

#people #students #schools #children #scoail #skills #adult #life #discussboth
Academics
 and social
skills
plays
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 an immense role in the life of every individual.
While
 a group of traditionalist claims that children score much better in their studies only if, they will pursue their learning in a single-sex
education
 institute, another group of people presumes that, youth learns better communication and social
skills
 which will benefit them in future only when
if
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they will complete their academic at mixed
schools
. In my opinion, if
both
 sexes will study together
then
 it will promote equality among them, they will learn better communication
skills
 and will
also
 get a chance to explore multiple fields of interest. To commence with, equality in the upcoming generation plays a significant role to make a better society, if the
students
 of
both
gender
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genders
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 pursue their
education
 sitting equal to each other,
then
 it will
promotes
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 equality, earlier girls were not allowed to do the job in Army but now
both
 men and women get trained in the same
education
center
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.
Moreover
,
both
gender
 will respect each other and learn communication
skills
 and in these
institutions
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students
 explore more carrier opportunities.
Usually
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 females prefer to be makeup
artist
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artists
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 rather than boys but now
their
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 are
excessive
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an excessive
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 number of males working as
a
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make-up
artists
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 in Bollywood and Hollywood.
Thus
, the benefits of pursuing
education
 in mixed
schools
 are even more significant than the single-sex
schools
.
However
, it is an undeniable fact that opposite sex-attract each other, which can become a major distraction for
students
 who are studying in mixed-
gender
education
 institutions, good scores in
academics
helps
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help
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 in building
better
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a better
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 future, but sometimes
students
 get distracted from their studies,
becuase
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because
 at the early age level of hormones increase
due to
 which even a small distraction can deviate a student from his path.
Therefore
, early
education
 of children should be completed in the single-sex school. In
an
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 nutshell, every aspect has its pros and cons.
Although
, pursuing
education
 from
single
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single-gender
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gender
schools
 definitely protects
from
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them from
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 distraction which helps them in
academics
 but
i
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I
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bieleve
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believe
 that rather than
academics
,
skills
 play
an
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a
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 significant role in building a better
for
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future,
therefore
students
 who prefer to study in
mixed
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mixed-gender
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gender
 institutions are more skilled and they respect
both
 genders.
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