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The diagram shows how fruit is canned. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram shows how fruit is canned. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The diagram illustrates the process of canning pear which includes several phases.
Overall
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, the process consists of several steps, beginning with the picking of the pear step and the user can of pear consumers.
To begin
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 ,with picked by hand and
then
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 picked fruits are transported to a factory to do many types of work the fruit.
Firstly
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, transported pears are washed, quality checked and
then
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 cold stored to get rid of viruses and batteries. In the next step, they divided into their grading groups. And products are peeled
then
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 they are through their core. After that step, cleaned pears are canned by an automat machine. Sealed cans are sterilized and cooked.
Then
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 products are sent to labelling. At least of steps, they are stored and despatched to supermarket buying people.

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