The chart below shows the types of communication training taken by &nbsp, employees in an international company and the reasons why they took &nbsp part in this training. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. The given diagram illustrates the categories of communication training and the reasons why nbsp and employees participated in this training course.

The chart below shows the types of communication training taken by &nbsp, employees in an international company and the reasons why they took &nbsp part in this training. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. The given diagram illustrates the categories of communication training and the reasons why nbsp and employees participated in this training course.
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The given diagram illustrates the categories of communication training and the reasons why nbsp and employees participated in
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training course.
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, it is evident that of all the examined types, distant learning occupied the lowest, holiday travel accounted for the highest,
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Regarding the first chart, part-time training is made up the largest with 39%, compared to a similar percentage of self-tuition and part-time training at weekends which constituted 22%. The
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for intensive training is low at 12%,
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, the
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learning, with the lowest
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, is at 5%. Concerning the second chart, 46% of the total is for the type of holiday travel. Other reasons and personal interest witness a similar percentage of 13% and 14%, respectively. The
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for business travel is not so high, only 17%,
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the percentage of communication with clients is not in the interest of the company employees, which is the lowest
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, with only 10%.
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