Write a letter to the manager of the footbal club. Introduce Explain experience andand special skills when do you think you can start

Dear Manager, I am writing

this

letter about that experience regarding football club. My full name is Pooja Panchal and I have currently Fifa international management program in Delhi.The reason that I am reaching you is that I have seen your advertisement that was fixed in the main hall of the school that was offering an assistant manager position. From my point of view, I believe attending some qualifications required

such

as previous experience in football management since I have taken a trainee program at one of the most important football clubs in the world which is Real Madri from Spain.

in addition

, I am a hardworking person and definitely fit in any squad as I am

also

a team player which allows me to be easily connected to every person in the institution. I had gotten my diploma in conflict management when I was in Italy which

also

can be useful for

this

position. As I am

due to

finish my course, I guess I will be available to start next week if I attend all qualifications needed. Looking forward to hearing from you. Yours Sincerely, Pooja

Submitted by sanjayp029 on Sat May 27 2023

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5Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

9 paragraphs

188 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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