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There have been some problems with public transport in your area recently. Write a letter to the manager of the public transport company. In your letter: - describe the problems - explain how these broblems are affecting the public - suggest what changes could be made

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Dear Public transport company manager, I am writing
this
 letter about the complaint regarding the situation with transportation facilities in our
area
.
To begin
 with, The most significant that in public transit and all areas allow in our city and person in specific arrange the vehicle.
In addition
 ,
that is
 not allowed a big vehicle in a rush because very difficult in the
area
. Another pertinent point is The basic requirement for a bus , a Trucksters, in more than is not allowed in the daytime because
this
time
 in the city traffic and rush space so individuals face problems in our city and that to allow at night
time
 because
this
time
 is int traffic rural
area
 and too easy access in the road in a big vehicle. in conclusion,
This
 crowded
area
 is not preferable to big transport in the daytime in that to access at night
time
. Thank you in advance for your kind cooperation. We would like to make our
area
 much better. Yours faithfully, Pooja
Submitted by sanjayp029 on

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