You have heard that a developer plans to build a shopping centre near your home. Write a letter to the council. In your letter say how you heard about the plan explain how you feel about it ask for more information about it

#developer #plans #centre #home #council #plan #information

Dear Sir I am writing to inform you that I got to know about the opening of a new shopping centre just nearby my area. It is really a good idea to move the area towards a step of development. I actually got to know from the advertisement regarding the opening of a new shopping mall. The presentation was so amazing, the lighting

as well as

the design. It was an alluring advertisement which is pushing me from inside to go shopping over there upon opening. Precisely, the feeling of a new opening cannot be described in words. Unfortunately, there is not any accessible mall nearby,

however

this

is significant news for each and everyone living there to save their time in

this

fast pace world where everybody is working and having less time. I am excited to share it with my friends so that we can plan ahead to visit at its grand opening. I would really appreciate it if you will share the exact date of the grand opening.

Also

, regarding the specific shops that are going to be established inside it. Yours faithfully Sam

Submitted by Gagan on Sat May 27 2023

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Do you want to check your IELTS essays?

Submit unlimited essays, letters and charts. Sign up right now and start improving your writing skills.

4Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

187 words

9.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

🚀 Prepare for IELTS writing section today!

Unlimited Task 1 checks
Get all the feedback you need to keep improving your charts and letters.
Unlimited Task 2 checks
Practice and perfect your skills with essays.
Personalized suggestions
Know how to boost your score.
Detailed mistakes analysis
Get instant feedback. Spot every mistake.
Topic ideas generator
Get topic-specific ideas to enhance your writing.
Vocabulary helper
Get the right words for any topic.
Progress tracking
Track your writing improvements.

What to do next:

Look at other essays:

5
band
You had borrowed money from your friend when you were facing some financial problems and forgot to pay it back. Write a letter to your friend and in your letter: ● apologize for being late in returning the money ● explain what happened ● say how you are going to fix the issue now
I am writing to apologize for not returning your cash on time .
5.5
band
In the developed world, average life expectancy is increasing. What problems will this cause of individuals and society? Suggest some measures that could be taken to reduce the impact of ageing populations.
It is true that people in industrialized nations can expect to live longer than ever before. Although there will undoubtedly be some negative consequences of this trend, societies can take steps mitigate these potential problems,
7.5
band
Write a letter to the restaurant, applying for the job. In your letter: •explain what you are currently doing •describe your suitability for this area of work •say when you can attend an interview
I am writing an application for receptionist in your cafe.
6
band
Some people think that having a set retirement age (e.g. 65 years) for everybody, regardless of occupation, is unfair. They believe that certain workers deserve to retire and receive a pension at an earlier age. Do you agree or disagree? Which types of workers do you think should benefit from early retirement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
It is undeniable that retirement has been one of the most common things in everyone’s work life. While it is argued by some that leaving your job and stopping working because of having reached a particular age is unacceptable for some careers, others consider that many people could early retire and get a government pension. I agree with that viewpoint and believe that workers should be able to early retire if they like.
6.5
band
If a product is good and meet customer needs,then people will buy it. So advertising it is unneccessary. To what extend do you agree or disagree?
Advertisement and merchandising come together when it is in a marketing process. However, some people believe that purchasing will be on its success if clients intentionally expect to buy products, which are adequate in excellent quality without broadcasting advertisements. As far as I am concerned, I strongly disagree about this statement due to the significance of advertising, which has an enormous impact on the marketing process.

You have heard that a developer plans to build a shopping centre near your home. Write a letter to the council. In your letter say how you heard about the plan explain how you feel about it ask for more information about it

You had borrowed money from your friend when you were facing some financial problems and forgot to pay it back. Write a letter to your friend and in your letter: ● apologize for being late in returning the money ● explain what happened ● say how you are going to fix the issue now

In the developed world, average life expectancy is increasing. What problems will this cause of individuals and society? Suggest some measures that could be taken to reduce the impact of ageing populations.

Write a letter to the restaurant, applying for the job. In your letter: •explain what you are currently doing •describe your suitability for this area of work •say when you can attend an interview

If a product is good and meet customer needs,then people will buy it. So advertising it is unneccessary. To what extend do you agree or disagree?