Some people like to eat in restaurants and at food stands, others like to eat at home. What are the advantages and disadvantages of eating out? Give reasons and examples to support your choice.

A half dosage of humans like to
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out in fancy
restaurants
and at food stands,
however
, others like to eat at
home
. From my point of view, eating out is trying to avoid the burden of cooking and cleaning up. Somehow, it is the best choice for enjoying the moment.
İn
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this
essay, İ will explain some of the benefits and drawbacks. İt should be admitted that, in our daily life, dining out is one
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common
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things. Because of individuals
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all day long, serving
to
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others and earning money to pay
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bills, for their needs
then
, they deserve to allow themselves to be served and pampered at
restaurants
.
Furthermore
,
home
cooking requires a lot of preparation.
For instance
, you have to know exactly what you want to eat at the start of the day so you can be able to prepare
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the ingredients and search for
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the recipe
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recipe
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if you
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. But some people
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to decide on what they will eat five minutes before mealtime. They scout the area for
restaurants
if a particular one looks interesting, they can simply make a park in front of it. İn addition, if
individual
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is
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lonely, having a meal alone, is not an easy stuff.
However
, finding a company in a restaurant,
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friendly relationships with
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regular customers is the best solution
escaping
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from the loneliest moments.
On the other hand
, some sort of bad circumstances can happen at food stands.
Such
as
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taste
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the taste
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of the meals may be bitter or raw.
Moreover
, if people
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around a bit more, it can cause a fight. Some people believe that
,
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making a dine at
home
is more full of
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vitamins which they are able to know the ingredient's freshness. Most importantly, eating out can lead to financial decreases. İndividual may not afford for dining out
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every single day.
To sum up
, İ
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strongly believe that eating out is one
the
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fun and enjoyable
thing
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.
However
, making a
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at
home
has a big difference. Because you make it
while
chilling out, make sure that all ingredients
combined
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together correctly and
tastes
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better than any
restaurants
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.
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