Smacking children is the best way to discipline. Do you extend agree or disagree?
Smiting
children
is the best way
to refine their behaviour. Nowadays some parents
utilize and choose this
way
that is
smashing child
to bring up but I slightly agree with that. This
essay will argue why smacking is not an easy way
to control children
.
To begin
with, children
are disciplined for their mistakes
or bad actions by their parents
. They will not repeat again these in the future life because they have fear namely child
scares from parents
. Cause of contemporary children
are spoilt, to bring up them parents
should smack the child
rather than explain in a good way
. For example
, If a child
has grown spoilt, explaining his, or her mistakes
to him or her in a good way
is difficult, namely should be affected from the psychical side by the parents
. There were some good aspects of smashing child
is to discipline.
On the other hand
, there are a number of positive sides to bringing up children
. Smacking children
always is not a good way
which is done mistakes
. More smiting children
will affect their emotions and they will be shy that is
not meet people, also
they not conversation with their friends, further
children
forget their own ideas. But parents
explain their child
's mistakes
with goodness, the child
's interest will increase day by day in new things and doing new work. If to say that only one word, smashing child
to discipline will die his interesting about new life.
To sum up
, smiting children
may be the easy way
to control their children
but this
way
negatively affects the child
's character and horizon. I think that explaining is the best way
to bring up a young child
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