Smacking children is the best way to discipline. Do you extend agree or disagree?

Smiting
children
is the best
way
to refine their behaviour. Nowadays some
parents
utilize and choose
this
way
that is
smashing
child
to bring up but I slightly agree with that.
This
essay will argue why smacking is not an easy
way
to control
children
.
To begin
with,
children
are disciplined for their
mistakes
or bad actions by their
parents
. They will not repeat again these in the future life because they have fear namely
child
scares from
parents
. Cause of contemporary
children
are spoilt, to bring up them
parents
should smack the
child
rather than explain in a good
way
.
For example
, If a
child
has grown spoilt, explaining his, or her
mistakes
to him or her in a good
way
is difficult, namely should be affected from the psychical side by the
parents
. There were some good aspects of smashing
child
is to discipline.
On the other hand
, there are a number of positive sides to bringing up
children
. Smacking
children
always is not a good
way
which is done
mistakes
. More smiting
children
will affect their emotions and they will be shy
that is
not meet people,
also
they not conversation with their friends,
further
children
forget their own ideas. But
parents
explain their
child
's
mistakes
with goodness, the
child
's interest will increase day by day in new things and doing new work. If to say that only one word, smashing
child
to discipline will die his interesting about new life.
To sum up
, smiting
children
may be the easy
way
to control their
children
but
this
way
negatively affects the
child
's character and horizon. I think that explaining is the best
way
to bring up a young
child
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