Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment; only governments and large companies can make a difference. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is sometimes argued that some people think only authorities and companies can contribute to

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world. In my opinion, I believe that individuals

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can play an important role

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environment

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. On the one hand, there are arguments that governments and large companies should take responsibility to develop the

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. One of the main reasons can be that public campaigns organised by

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and

company

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are especially important because they can lead

population

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in protecting and encouraging their

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of

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our planet.

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means that they may contribute to

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awareness

. Another reason can be that they are responsible for setting up policies and regulations that control

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behaviour of citizens.

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, I am more

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number of

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individual

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.

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, these days, human activities

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increasingly growing air pollution

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as burning fossil fuels for energy.

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human activities contribute to global warming.

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, it is crucial for humans to acknowledge their role in preserving our

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and make efforts to reduce activities that have negative impacts on the

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as adopting cleaner energy sources and raising eco-friendly habits.

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, more and more people

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their own vehicle when they commute to work.

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, they should replace public

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transportation

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using

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privite

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private

car. In conclusion, it seems to me that raising eco-friendly habits of

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lead to

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and

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for the

environment

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.