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Some people think that the best way to improve road safety is by reducing the maximum speed limits on vehicles others think there are other better ways . Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

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One's security should be our first priority against all other activities. There are some concerns raised by groups of individuals about
road
safety
 should be focused and measures must be taken into consideration like limiting the speeds of
traffic
.
However
, others believe that there could be another plausible way regarding
safety
 on the
road
. In
this
 essay, I will describe briefly both points of view and share my opinion as well. One school thought that
road
safety
 can be enhanced by lowering the speed limits on automobiles.
According to
 the data analysis, most of the
accidents
 occurred
due to
 speeding and loss of control of vehicles.
Moreover
, nowadays the
traffic
 on streets and highways gets doubled in the past few years but there are no changes regarding speed limits. To elaborate on
this
, there is an example about one of the busiest streets of the city which has a speed limit of sixty kilometres per hour but a lot of pedestrians pathways had been included in the previous year causing the vehicles to slow down and stop simultaneously which ends up with an increment of
accidents
. So,
traffic
 enforcement should take
this
 into consideration to solve
this
 problem. Other schools thought that there are better solutions for
road
safety
such
 as installing
traffic
 lights on busy roads.
Furthermore
, some people suggest to increases the
road
 signs about
safety
 will help to decrease
road
 hazards.
For instance
, if the highway has a speed of eighty kilometres per hour and the number of
accidents
 increases
due to
 collision with an animal. In
this
 case, they should install awareness signs about animal crossing
instead
 of reducing the speed limit. These kinds of solutions can help to improve
road
safety
 and keep the flow of
traffic
 at a regular speed. In my opinion, I would say declining the speed limits is the best way to incline
road
safety
 because the
,
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 if we keep driving at high speeds with more
traffic
,
traffic
 can not hold the
accidents
 for a long period of time.
Also
, there is a quote that we read on almost every highway, 'Speeding kills'.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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