You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Your friend is thinking about learning to drive and would like some advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter • say why a driving licence is advantageous • recommend a driving school • give any extra guidance/tips

Dear Raman, Hope you are doing great. I am glad that
finally
you decided to take driving seriously. As you know driving is very important.
Moreover
, to save time , driving is a must. Rather than
this
, there will be more opportunities for you after learning to drive.
Firstly
, as you are seeking my advice, I would say you should start driving classes
this
week because summer is the perfect weather to take a license.
However
, heavy snowfalls make it very hard for new drivers to learn
driving
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and drive.
Secondly
, you can take driving classes from
first-class
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academy. They have very experienced trainers and only charge $45/hour.
Furthermore
, their class timings are
also
very flexible and will pick up and drop you at your location. So, I think
that is
a perfect school for beginners.
Moreover
, they will make you ready for an exam within 3 months. I hope
this
advice will be valuable to you. You're loving, Navjot Kaur
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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