Some people think that the best way to solve global environment problems is to increase the cost of fuel. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Some individuals believe that the better method to tackle environmental issues is to
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the price of petrol. I totally disagree with
this
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statement, and I
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like to recommend some possible measures in order to improve
this
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situation. To being with, there are
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several

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reasons why I believe that growing the
cost
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of
fuel
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is not the perfect solution.
Firstly
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,
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increase
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an increase

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the
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price of
fuel
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can have a negative impact
in
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on

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people
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live and make the problem worsen.
This
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because
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some
people
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live in rural
area
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areas

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or cities
have
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that have

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poor
of
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apply

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infrastructure namely, public transport , which means
people
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do not have
alternative
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an alternative

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than
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to

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using vehicles.
Secondly
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,
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increase
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increasing

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the
cost
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of petrol can
contributes
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contribute

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to
go
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going

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up
of
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apply

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the
cost
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of basic needs
such
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as
,
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apply

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food, goods,
clothes
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and clothes

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,
this
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because
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transfer these products via cars and trucks which
uesd
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use

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fuel
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.
Therefore
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,
increase
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the gap between wealthy and poor
people
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, and
also
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increase
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the
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poverty and encourage
people
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to commit
crime
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a crime
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in order to meet their
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responsibilities. Regarding
of
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alternative solutions to
this
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issue , I think the government can make a huge difference by
adopating
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some steps. The first
meausre
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measure

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the
authouirties
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can make
improvement
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improvements

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in
public
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transport system
such
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as
,
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buses, subways,
railways
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to make it more convenient and faster to motivate
people
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to utilize
it
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.
Second
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measure, incentivize
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companies ,schools, and
university
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allows
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students and employees to work or study from home.
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, these steps can assist to reduce the number of cars on the roads
as well as
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CO2 footprint ,
also
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mitigat
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mitigate

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climate change and global warming. In conclusion, it seems to me that
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increase
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increasing

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the
cost
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of
fuel
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is not
good
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solution and I suggested effective methods to deal with environmental problems.

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