Some people think that the best way to solve global environment problems is to increase the cost of fuel. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some individuals believe that the better method to tackle environmental issues is to
rise
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the price of petrol. I totally disagree with
this
statement, and I
woulid
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would
like to recommend some possible measures in order to improve
this
situation. To being with, there are
serveral
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several
reasons why I believe that growing the
cost
of
fuel
is not the perfect solution.
Firstly
,
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the
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price of
fuel
can have a negative impact
in
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on
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people
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people's
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live and make the problem worsen.
This
because
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some
people
live in rural
area
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areas
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or cities
have
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that have
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poor
of
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infrastructure namely, public transport , which means
people
do not have
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than
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to
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using vehicles.
Secondly
,
increase
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the
cost
of petrol can
contributes
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contribute
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to
go
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up
of
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the
cost
of basic needs
such
as
,
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food, goods,
clothes
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and clothes
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,
this
because
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transfer these products via cars and trucks which
uesd
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use
fuel
.
Therefore
,
increase
the gap between wealthy and poor
people
, and
also
increase
the
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poverty and encourage
people
to commit
crime
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in order to meet their
familiies
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family's
responsibilities. Regarding
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alternative solutions to
this
issue , I think the government can make a huge difference by
adopating
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adopting
some steps. The first
meausre
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measure
the
authouirties
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authorities
can make
improvement
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improvements
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in
public
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the public
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transport system
such
as
,
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buses, subways,
railways
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and railways
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to make it more convenient and faster to motivate
people
to utilize
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them
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.
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measure, incentivize
the
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companies ,schools, and
university
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universities
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to
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students and employees to work or study from home.
Thus
, these steps can assist to reduce the number of cars on the roads
as well as
CO2 footprint ,
also
mitigat
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mitigate
climate change and global warming. In conclusion, it seems to me that
increase
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the
cost
of
fuel
is not
good
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a good
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solution and I suggested effective methods to deal with environmental problems.
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