The chart below shows the annual pay (thousands of US dollars) for doctors and other workers in seven countries in 2004.
The given bar chart illustrates the comparison of the doctor’s and other workers’ salaries in 7 different countries in 2004. In brief, the annual pay of doctors and other workers in the United States was the highest
position
respectively, Use synonyms
whereas
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payment
in Germany, Czech and Italy is the lowest of all.
Moving to the details, payment for doctors in the US was in the first place at 120 thousand dollars, Replace the word
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while
doctors in Finland can obtain only around $30, and it was the bottom Linking Words
position
. other countries show a small difference, with all of them except the US and Finland at 60 to 70.
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On the other hand
, other employees in the US could get the highest payment at over $40 thousand, and the salary of the workers in Germany, Italy and Czech was the Linking Words
last
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position
at $20 thousand. though the doctor’s salary in Finland is the bottom Use synonyms
position
, normal staff was the third top Use synonyms
position
.Use synonyms
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