The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean Island between 2010 and 2017. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words
The diagram illustrates how percentage of
number
of Change the article
a number
the number
tourists
visited a Caribbean Island over a period of 7 years.
Overall
, at
the Change preposition
in
end
the total Add a comma
,end
number
of tourists
was high despite the slow rise through the years.
In the first year, they stood at 1 million
visitors
and rose constantly to reach 1.5 million
in 2012.This
was followed by another constant increase, although
much steeper, in 2015 when the number
of travellers was about 2.7 million
. However
, this
upward trend was suddenly broken andCorrect article usage
the
tourists
remained relatively static for one year. Eventually, the number
of tourists
saw a significant rise in 2017.
Moreover
,there are two places where visitors
stayed while
their trip. At
the beginning 0.25 Change preposition
In
million
visitors
stayed on cruise ship
Fix the agreement mistake
ships
whereas
, 0.75 million
visitors
chosen
an island. Both of them experienced drastic fluctuations between 2010 and 2017 and Wrong verb form
chose
at
the end Change preposition
in
number
of visitor
Fix the agreement mistake
visitors
stayed
on Wrong verb form
staying
island
was 1.5 Add an article
the island
million
likewise
, the number
of visitors
stayed on cruise ship
was 2 Fix the agreement mistake
ships
million
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "at the end".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, tourists, million, visitors with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 6 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "rise" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "stayed" was used 4 times.
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