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We can get knowledge from news, but some people think we cannot trust journalist. What do you think? What qualities do you think a successful journalist should have?

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In recent years, we can easily learn worldwide
news
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 through newspapers, magazines ,and social media.
While
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 the
news
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 is more accessible than we used to have, there are many
people
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 who think that we shouldn'
t
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 trust
journalists
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. In my opinion, it is true that we should do research by ourselves first before believing in the
news
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.
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, there are still some well-known
journalists
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,
provide
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who provide
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 the truth to the public. The main reason I think we shouldn'
t
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 totally believe in the press is that we are living in a changeable world that every second something is happening around the world. The more quickly
journalists
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 publish their
news
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, the more viewers they can get, which means they can make more money. Because of
this
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, some
journalists
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 don'
t
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 care about whether the
news
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 is true or false. To be more specific, the thing that they want is to attract
people
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's attention.
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, ten years before, there were two suspects in the murder.
Although
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 the police hadn'
t
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 found any evidence showing who the criminal is, the media started to imply to the public that one of the suspects is the criminal.
This
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 is very unfair to the suspects. Though there are some irritating
journalists
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, we have lots of reliable
journalists
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. I think to become a successful journalistjournalists you must acquire two skills.
First,
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you need to provide the true story to the
people
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, which means you should check the fact before you publish the
news
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.
This
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 method will make
people
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 trust you and start to read your
news
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.
Second,
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you need to have a good story-telling ability to attract
people
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 to read your
news
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. If your story is boring,
people
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 will move forward to find someone who is funnier than you. In conclusion, it is undeniable that nowadays we can obtain the
news
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 easier but it is
also
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 important for us to check whether the
news
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 provided by
journalists
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 is true or false.

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