We can get knowledge from news, but some people think we cannot trust journalist. What do you think? What qualities do you think a successful journalist should have?

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In recent years, we can easily learn worldwide
news
through newspapers, magazines ,and social media.
While
the
news
is more accessible than we used to have, there are many
people
who think that we shouldn'
t
trust
journalists
. In my opinion, it is true that we should do research by ourselves first before believing in the
news
.
However
, there are still some well-known
journalists
,
provide
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the truth to the public. The main reason I think we shouldn'
t
totally believe in the press is that we are living in a changeable world that every second something is happening around the world. The more quickly
journalists
publish their
news
, the more viewers they can get, which means they can make more money. Because of
this
, some
journalists
don'
t
care about whether the
news
is true or false. To be more specific, the thing that they want is to attract
people
's attention.
For instance
, ten years before, there were two suspects in the murder.
Although
the police hadn'
t
found any evidence showing who the criminal is, the media started to imply to the public that one of the suspects is the criminal.
This
is very unfair to the suspects. Though there are some irritating
journalists
, we have lots of reliable
journalists
. I think to become a successful journalistjournalists you must acquire two skills.
First,
you need to provide the true story to the
people
, which means you should check the fact before you publish the
news
.
This
method will make
people
trust you and start to read your
news
.
Second,
you need to have a good story-telling ability to attract
people
to read your
news
. If your story is boring,
people
will move forward to find someone who is funnier than you. In conclusion, it is undeniable that nowadays we can obtain the
news
easier but it is
also
important for us to check whether the
news
provided by
journalists
is true or false.
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