Some people say that public libraries should be free; otherwise they are just a waste of money, especially because modern technologies and the Internet allow easy access to resources. Discuss and give your point of view.

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In our modern world, along

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advances

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technology and of the Internet,

people

nowadays can

recieve

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receive

any piece of information they want through the Web at home.

As a result

, some claim that having

libraries

that are free to the public is unnecessary. I disagree with

this

opinion and believe that free public

libraries

should be preserved. In

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essay, I will discuss both

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this

topic and will

further

explain my opinion.

Firstly

, having a free educational source for everyone creates

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equal opportunity for the poor. Some families don'

have the financial

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privilege

to afford advanced

electronical

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electronic

devices,

such

as computers, or even can'

pay the Internet bill.

This

leads to many

people

spending their time in a public library in order to gain knowledge and study for school.

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, closing

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libraries

will cause kids

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fortune isn'

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their favour fail school, which directly leads to not going to college and

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eventually

unsuccessful job

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Consequently

, preventing poor kids from library education is

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unconscious discrimination in an unending circle where the

unprivilaged

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unprivileged

privileged

continue to be

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unprivileged

privileged

Moreover

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libraries

can reduce the number of underage drinking and smoking. Teenagers have

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amount of free time on their hands,

although

most cities don'

have a variety of

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activities

for young adults.

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leaves the youngsters with spare time where most of them

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exposed to

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alcohol

cigeretts

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cigarettes

and illegal drugs. Studies have shown that having a space

that is

available for everyone, no matter what it is, will make

people

enter that place. That means that keeping public

libraries

free and open will not only

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decrease

the number of illegal drinking

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but

also

gain youngsters great knowledge.

Nevertheless

, local citizens are concerned about their taxes going to

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nonvital

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institute

with no profit,

such

as public

libraries

while

other

facilites

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facilities

needs

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to be

priortized

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prioritized

. An example of

this

issue is a

mendatory

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mandatory

place like a hospital that needs to go through construction in order to expand its capacity,

while

taxes are being paid to keep an outdated, useless building.

Although

the

people

's worries, I tend to concede and believe that

library

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also

an important

institue

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institute

in each city, just as much as other vital places. In conclusion, I believe that the government should pay for free public

libraries

, based on financial and social reasons.

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