Some people say that public libraries should be free; otherwise they are just a waste of money, especially because modern technologies and the Internet allow easy access to resources. Discuss and give your point of view.
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people
nowadays can recieve
any piece of information they want through the Web at home. Correct your spelling
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As a result
, some claim that having libraries
that are free to the public is unnecessary. I disagree with this
opinion and believe that free public libraries
should be preserved. In this
essay, I will discuss both view
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on
this
topic and will further
explain my opinion.
Firstly
, having a free educational source for everyone creates an
equal opportunity for the poor. Some families don'Correct article usage
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have the financial privilage
to afford advanced Correct your spelling
privilege
electronical
devices, Correct your spelling
electronic
such
as computers, or even can't
pay the Internet bill. This
leads to many people
spending their time in a public library in order to gain knowledge and study for school. For example
, closing free of charge
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free-of-charge
libraries
will cause kids who's
fortune isn'Correct your spelling
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Consequently
, preventing poor kids from library education is an
unconscious discrimination in an unending circle where the Remove the article
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unprivilaged
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Moreover
, no charge
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no-charge
libraries
can reduce the number of underage drinking and smoking. Teenagers have big
amount of free time on their hands, Correct article usage
a big
although
most cities don't
have a variety of activies
for young adults. Correct your spelling
activities
This
leaves the youngsters with spare time where most of them being
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are
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alcohol
cigeretts
and illegal drugs. Studies have shown that having a space Correct your spelling
cigarettes
that is
available for everyone, no matter what it is, will make people
enter that place. That means that keeping public libraries
free and open will not only decrese
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decrease
,
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also
gain youngsters great knowledge.
Nevertheless
, local citizens are concerned about their taxes going to an
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institue
with no profit, Correct your spelling
institute
such
as public libraries
, while
other facilites
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facilities
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priortized
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prioritized
this
issue is a mendatory
place like a hospital that needs to go through construction in order to expand its capacity, Correct your spelling
mandatory
while
taxes are being paid to keep an outdated, useless building.
Although
the people
's worries, I tend to concede and believe that library
is Correct article usage
the library
also
an important institue
in each city, just as much as other vital places.
In conclusion, I believe that the government should pay for free public Correct your spelling
institute
libraries
, based on financial and social reasons.Submitted by mayab2001 on
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