The table below shows social and economic indicators for dour countries in 1994, according to united Nations statistics
The given table illustrates social and economic indicators for dour countries
according to
United Nations statistics in 1994
Overall
, Japan
is the best country for annual income per person, life expectancy for birth, and adult literacy rate. In addition
, Canada is the country with the biggest consumption of calories. However
, Zaire
is the country with the lowest of the four indicators.
To begin
with, the annual income for Japan
is the highest at 15760, the second rank was Cabada at 11100, followed by Peru
at 160 and the lowest was Zaire
at 130. Japan
became the highest of
life expectancy, people can live up to 78. Change preposition
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Next,
Canadians are 76 years old. Peru
was the third rank at 51 and the lowest for life expectancy was Zaire
at 47. People in Canada consumed 3326 calories per person, and 2846 in Japan
. In contrast
, in Peru
, the daily calorie supply per person was 1947 and the lowest was in Zaire
in number 1749. Canada and Japan
have the same percentage of adult literacy rate at 99% and Peru
was 68 and the last
was Zaire
at 34%.Submitted by ieltscuns2022 on
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