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As well as making money, businesses also have social responsibilitiesTo what extent do you agree or disagree?

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The aim for every
business
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 is to gain profit as much as they can. Some people claim that businesses need to contribute to the well-being of society. In my point of view, it is required for every
company
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 to have a corporate social responsibilities program because of some reasons mentioned below.
Firstly
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, without ,employees no
business
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 can be run, which means employees are one of the most important resources of a
company
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. So every
company
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 should care about their employees who support the success of their
business
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.
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, a paint manufacturing
company
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 should provide a medical check-up program to its staff yearly since some chemicals can be harmful to humans.
Secondly
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, companies should have a CSR program for the environment since there might be impacts on the environment because of their
business
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,
for example
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,
pollution
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 can be caused because of the waste from factories since some companies throw thrashes into the river and gas produced from some industries can lead to air
pollution
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.
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, companies should take part in community programs since the community
also
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 has to suffer from the side effects made by businesses.
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, if there was air
pollution
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 in the town because of factories, people living in that town had to suffer from the
pollution
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 as well.
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, businesses should have social responsibilities to society,
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, putting some proportion of profit into local charities. If they contribute to the well-being of their staff, the environment and society, their image will be enhanced and they can get awareness from the public. It is a win-win situation for the
company
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.
To conclude
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, even though making a profit is the main purpose for every
company
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, they should take social responsibility and contribute to the well-being of people and things related to their
business
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 so that they can get recognition from the public which is valuable to the image of the
company
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.
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