A friend of yours is thinking of going on a camping holiday for the first time this summer. He/she has asked for your advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: * explain why you think your friend would enjoy a camping holiday * describe some possible disadvantages * say whether you would like to go camping with your friend this summer
Hi, Mark,
I am writing to share my interest in the camping event our dean of residence invited our sophomore-year students to join.
I must say
,
when seeing the introductions
of mountain camping activity, the stunning view of Remove the comma
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Mountain sites and their unique and out-of-traditional cuisine
offered at an affordable and reasonable price won my heart. Since I have an array of assignments, it is time to step out of our room and library. We spend lots of time studying and the pile of tasks, but we embrace the natural beauty. I know you are really into traditional Italian food, and they offer all-you-can-eat service; I bet you will love it, too.
However
, this
three-day activity is before the deadline for
the literature proposal, so we should be well-prepared for this
week. Plus, we have a meeting with the science teacher, which will also
be postponed. He may respond reluctant and display unwillingness, lowering the score, which we should get even higher. In this
case, some of our regular schedule shows a little mix-up and should be rescheduled as soon as possible.
I invite you to go with me, create our memories of traveling
and exploring the serene beauty, and recharge both body and spirit. I have never been a part of my life journey without you.Change the spelling
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greeting and closing
Your letter lacks a proper greeting and closing, which are necessary in a personal letter format. Always begin with a greeting such as 'Dear [friend's name],' and end with a closing such as 'Best regards, [Your Name].'
logical structure
Your ideas could be better organized. Try to arrange your points in a clear, logical order and begin a new paragraph for each main point to improve readability.
single idea per paragraph
Your letter should focus on one main idea per paragraph for enhanced clarity and coherence. Avoid mixing different ideas within the same paragraph.
complete response
Address all parts of the prompt in your letter to ensure a complete response. Make sure to explain why your friend would enjoy camping, describe possible disadvantages, and state whether you want to join them.
suitable writing tone
Maintain a suitable tone throughout the letter. While a friendly tone is appropriate for writing to a friend, remember to stay on topic and focus on the purpose of the letter.
The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,