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Many people prefer to spend all the money they earn and not save it. What are the reasons for this? Is this a positive or negative development?

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In
this
 era, inhabitants live hand to mouth since they do not like to
do
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preserve money for their future. The possible causes for
this
 trend would be discussed below and I consider it as a negative change.
To begin
 with, dwellers prefer to utilize all their earnings regularly because of many reasons.
Initially
, they believe their fundamental aim is to enjoy their life
at
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 the utmost.
Consequently
, they want to turn every second of life into
unforgettable
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 moment, no matter, how much they have to spend.
For instance
, youngsters frequently visit with their friends to recreational clubs for dancing or playing games.
Besides
this
, in
this
 hectic lifestyle, they are suffering from enormous mental disorders and try to relax in the way they prefer.
In other words
, specifically in
western
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 nations, dwellers work very hard
in
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on
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 their weekdays, and to relieve from stress
of
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personal and professional life, on the weekend they entertain themselves.
Also
, occasionally they spend their money on expensive clothes, shoes, or other services for
purpose
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 of
show
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 off among companions.
Furthermore
,
this
 development has brought considerable drawbacks. To commence with, in the urge of being rich or
enjoyment
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 people run out of money,
Infact
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In fact
 after
loss
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the loss
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 of employment they found it arduous to
fulfill
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 fundamental needs and suffer from
financial
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the financial
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 crisis.
For instance
, newspapers frequently
entitles
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regarding
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about
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 victims of unemployment, who had committed
crime
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crimes
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 or suicide,
due to
 financial
break down
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.
Apart from
this
,
economical
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crisis
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crises
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 within countries have a considerable impact
upon
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on
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common
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the common
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 man.
For example
, inflation following
pandemic
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the pandemic
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have
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 risen the cost of all the provisions, in certain situations,
aperson
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a person
 used to
of
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keep savings
is
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could only afford high grocery, transportation or rental services. In conclusion, instability in
expenditure
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the expenditure
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 of income for the purpose of entertainment or to receive fake pride leads to financial breakdown. To curb
this
, seminars to acknowledge
public
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the public
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 regarding
balance
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the balance
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 between income and assets ought to be provided by high authorities or educational institutes.
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