The pie charts below compare water usage in San Diego, California and the rest of the world.
The given charts give information about the amount of
water
used in Use synonyms
San
Use synonyms
Diego
, Use synonyms
California
and the rest of the world.
Use synonyms
Overall
, Linking Words
while
city dwellers use Linking Words
water
the most in Use synonyms
San
Use synonyms
Diego
and Use synonyms
California
, Use synonyms
that
in the rest of the world takes up the lowest portion.
Correct word choice
apply
Furthermore
, worldwide agricultural Linking Words
water
usage is the highest out of Use synonyms
three
charts.
The proportion of residential Correct article usage
the three
water
usage in Use synonyms
San
Use synonyms
Diego
County is over half as much again as that of Use synonyms
California
and that of both charts accounts for the highest portion. Use synonyms
In contrast
, the Linking Words
water
used for agriculture in Use synonyms
San
Use synonyms
Diego
and Use synonyms
California
is the smallest fraction, at 17% and 28% respectively. Use synonyms
San
Use synonyms
Diego
’s industry uses Use synonyms
water
10% less than that of Use synonyms
California
.
In the rest of the world, agricultural Use synonyms
water
usage occupies over a half portion and is over four as much as that of Use synonyms
San
Use synonyms
Diego
County Use synonyms
while
residents use the least compared with the others. Linking Words
In addition
, the Linking Words
water
used for the industry is the same as that of Use synonyms
San
Use synonyms
Diego
and 10% lower than Use synonyms
California
.Use synonyms
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