The chart gives information about marriage and children in a selection countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram illustrates the statistic of babies born compared to the average age at first marriage in nine countries.
Overall
, the trend for the average age of a merger does not equivalent to the Linking Words
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they have. Use synonyms
For example
, Danish tend to marry after 32, but they only have 1-2 kids only. Linking Words
While
Kenya has the highest Linking Words
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of Use synonyms
children
(more than three), the married age on 22.
As appear in the chart, there are four countries which have a high average wedding Use synonyms
number
(around 30-33) and have 1-2 Use synonyms
children
(the countries are Australia, Netherlands, United Kingdom and Denmark). Use synonyms
Whereas
, Kenya and India had the most Linking Words
children
(more than 2) but they chose to stay with a partner in their early 20s (22 and 24, respectively). Surprisingly, the Chinese prefer to build a family at around 26 but have the lowest Use synonyms
number
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children
, which only have no more than 2 offspring. Use synonyms
Lastly
, women in Brazil and Denmark choose to marry in their middle 20s (26 and 27, respectively) with a well-balanced Linking Words
number
of babies they have (1-2 babies).Use synonyms
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