The table describes the changes of people who went for international travel in 1990, 1995, 2000 and 2005 (million).

The table describes the changes of people who went for international travel in 1990, 1995, 2000 and 2005 (million).
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The table gives information about the
number
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of people from different regions who
traveled
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travelled
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around the world from 1990 to 2005.
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, for the first time in a survey, the American area has the most
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of
travelers
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, but it decreased dramatically over the next 5 years and fluctuated after the fifteen years.
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,
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of America,
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the total figure of people who went on global travel increased considerably over the period. In 1990, over 680
million
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Americans
traveled
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internationally, but the
number
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rapidly plummeted to around 112
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in 1995, after that the
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little rocked between 110 and 120
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at the time of the survey. In comparison, the
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of people who
traveled
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International in Europe is more than 280
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in 1990, it soared to approximately 390
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in 1995, and reach 400
million
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in 2005. The
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of foreign
travelers
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in Asia and the Pacific increasing steadily every year, first-hand the figure is over 60
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, In 2000 the
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raised greater than 100
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, continuing to rise after five years, reaching 135
million
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in 2005.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, million with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • significant increase
  • international travel
  • popular destinations
  • economic growth
  • technological advancements
  • ease of travel
  • cultural exchange
  • globalization
  • fluctuations
  • trend
  • millions of travelers
  • annual growth rate
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