The diagram below shows how a central heating system in a house works. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows how a central heating system in a house works.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram illustrates how a central heating
system
operates in a typical
house
to maintain the inside
temperature
and tap
water
at a certain
temperature
. A
water
tank, a pipe, a storage tank, and a
boiler
, which might be gas or oil, are all components of the central heating
system
,
as well as
the hot
water
radiator, which is made up of a number of tiny tubes.
Initially
, cold
water
is taken from the local
water
utility supplier and passed through a
boiler
, which is either gas or oil driven, and a pump is connected to it. The radiators are connected to the
boiler
and are made of tiny tubes. When the cold
water
passes through the pump and
boiler
, it gains
temperature
and becomes hot
water
, and from the
water
taps, the
house
members get hot
water
.
Thus
, the whole
system
that covers the
house
keeps it warm. The central heating
system
mainly works by flowing
water
through the
house
and increasing its
temperature
of it.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words system, house, temperature, water, boiler with synonyms.
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