The diagram below shows how Olive Oil is manufactured.Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information below.

The diagram below shows how Olive Oil is manufactured.Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information below.
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The figure gives information about the way that Olive Oil is produced.
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,
this
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is a step-by-step process that
have
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seven stages in total,
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with
haversting
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harvesting
olive for the tree, to the
storaging
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storage
and sales of the
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production. First of all,
olives
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are
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harvest
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from trees by farmers and
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being taken to the rinsing machine where they washed with cold water. After being rinsed, the
olives
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are transferred to another machine which grinds the
olives
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to separate the fruit from the seeds. During
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stage, the
olives
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are ground into a paste, and the olive stones are removed. The olive paste is
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placed in a bag with holes before being put through a pressing machine, followed by another process where any excess water is separated from the oil. And
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, the olive oil is packaged and delivered to shops where it can be sold.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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