The charts below give information about the way in which water was used in different countries in 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below give information about the way in which water was used in different countries in 2000. 

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie charts provide information about the proportion of
water
usage
for several
purposes
,
while
the bar graph illustrates the amount of aquatic
usage
in various countries. Both were taken in the year 2000 and measured in percentages.
Overall
, it is noticeable that the amount of
water
used was dominant for
agriculture
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agricultural
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application
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,
while
Canada was high for industrial objectives and India for agricultural
usage
.
According to
the pie charts, the
water
intake was high for
agriculture
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purposes
, which accounted for seven in ten, followed by industrial
usage
at nearly a quarter, more than three times higher than that of agriculture. Other than that, domestic
purposes
showed the least at just below one in ten, nearly three times lower than industrial intake. Turning to the bar charts data, Canada and India showed the most
water
usage
than other countries. Canada used 80% of
water
for industrial
purposes
, eight times higher than New
Zealand
for the same category.
Furthermore
, India
also
utilized almost 100% of
water
for agricultural needs, which was more than doubled compared to New
Zealand
at 44% .
However
, for domestic
usage
, New
Zealand
accounted
at
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46% of
water
being used, making New
Zealand
the highest among all countries.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words water, usage, purposes, zealand with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "showed" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.

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