Students today cam access information online, so libraries are not necessary. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is true that pupils have more readily available

information

now a days

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over the internet.

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is strongly agree that access to data online is more reasonable

i

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cant undermine the importance of

libraries

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libraries'

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role which it plays in a

students

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life. With the advent of faster and widely available internet services, learning has now become much more effective and easy for

students

with all the

information

available just a few clicks away online. Many

students

have

part time

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jobs

along with

their studies which does not allow them to have ample time to study in

libraries

. With

information

available readily online they can use whatever spare time they have to

fullfill

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fulfil

their tasks. There

also

has been a study where they found that visual explanation for the content makes

students

retain more

information

than studying simply from textbooks alone.

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the fact that one can gain access to multiple resources of literature from

world

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wide web at ease simultaneously

also

adds to the long list of advantages as to why studying online is much better. Whilst

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strongly agree that getting data online is very appealing and easy,

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cannot underestimate the fact

libraries

play in a

students

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life. There are some positive points to be listed here as to why.

Firstly

, going to

library

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keeps a

persons

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routine in check

as a result

of which the student is more disciplined in their schedule.

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there is a sense of motivation which a student gets when he or she sees

the

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fellow pupil in

library

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the library

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. Dedicated study rooms have always been known to have an environment of

quite

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and focused studying which inevitably helps

this

population. In conclusion,

while

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strongly agree

having

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ease of learning online is much better

i

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partly disagree with the fact that

libraries

are not important.