Parents should not pressure their children to choose particular profession. Young people should have the freedom to choose path they like. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

Offspings should not be enforced by their guardians in opting
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specific career. I strongly agree that
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children should be encouraged to pursue their desired career
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. But
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cannot undermine the importance of
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advice in making that decision. I am a strong advocate of allowing the younger ones to follow their desired dream
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. The fact that the child has to grow up and devote the rest of their lives to the
profession
they choose to pursue will have a
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impact on their career growth and more
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their mental
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. Studies have shown that most famous researchers who aced in their respective fields did exceptionally well only because of the fact that they selected the
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they were really passionate about.
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generation decide what they want to become later in life.
While
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mostly
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of children following their dream jobs I partly
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advice in selecting future
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. The reason for
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one of those people who want the best for their younger ones. Considering the experience they have
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life over the years they should have the right to give advice to the
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offsprings
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in selecting their future
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but never enforce it. I believe, making shared
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and discussion gives more fruitful results than forcing decisions. In
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mostly agree
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the statement that children should not be enforced
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their future plans by guardians but discussions always bring forth amazing results.
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