Some people say that the best way to reduce the time that people spend travelling to work is to have large roads that go through the city centre. Others however, think that there are more effective ways to reduce the time people spend travelling to work. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Numerous people think, having highways which travel through the centre of the city is a proper solution to save
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could be wasted from travelling to work;
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, few others say that there are better alternative ways to achieve
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there are alternatives like working from
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which have some positive sides
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, I think it will reduce traffic congestion by building bigger roads. To save
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, working from
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has become a trend recently because there are some other benefits.
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, a person who works from
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can not only be more productive but
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can enjoy
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with his family
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.
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, he can work long hours without considering the
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to travel
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. Despite the fact
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can save
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, I do not think
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method can be implemented for all the occupations in a city because some may require more personal attention than others. As an
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outdoor workers like engineers have to go out and see their sites often. Those on the other side of the argument say, building highways can save
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can be expensive, it will definitely resolve traffic congestion which is a major
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-consuming problem in most places. To illustrate, if bigger roads with proper entrances and exits were developed, employers could get to their work without having to wait in the rush hour.
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, Colombo which is a major city in Sri Lanka used to be filled with traffic, but after the new highway system was implemented people are getting to their workplace on
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.
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I agree with
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view. In conclusion, many employees state that developing new roads which lead through town is a better way than other alternatives. I agree with
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statement because alternatives like working from
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are not for everyone but developing highways not only could save
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but
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could be beneficial for many.
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