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Some experts believe that when a country is already rich, any additional increase in economic wealth does not make its citizens any more satisfied. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Besides
 the economic
wealth
 of a country, there are other kinds of problems that society faces,
such
 as citizen happiness, security issues at schools and the mental health of a population.
That is
 why there is a discussion about whether
people
 from rich
countries
 would get even more satisfied with
money
 increases in their lives. Some
people
 believe that more
money
 actually would not do any difference in the satisfaction of
people
 from rich
countries
.
Thus
,
this
 essay will discuss
this
 statement above,
also
 an opposite defence, and
further
 expose my own opinion. The population from rich
countries
 generally has equally enough
money
 to live comfortably.
However
, they carry other sorts of issues, which they might hope to be solved
instead
 of enriching even more.
For instance
, in the United States frequently shooters invade schools or other crowded places to murder anyone without reason. In Europe, many
people
 have gotten depressed in the midst of all the
wealth
. I
also
 agree that more affluent citizens of the world will not get any more satisfied with more
money
 which they already have a lot. As Maslow’s pyramid logic, rich country citizens already are well affluent with basic needs and now are expecting to have another kind of satisfaction other than economic
wealth
. It comes to a more complex level of necessity and needs, orbited around psychological and social spheres. That way, in conclusion,
people
 from rich
countries
 do not get any more satisfied by more economic
wealth
 because they have already enough, but still have needs, in other scopes though.
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