Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems.

People

have different views about what is the major environmental issue. Some individuals believe that

protect

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animals

and

plants

from extinction should give

prioritize

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, others

people

think there are necessary

environment

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environmental

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problems than

animals

. In my opinion, global warming and

pollution

are

crucial

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issues than preserving

animals

and

plants

. On the one hand, There are many reasons why some member of society support the idea that

animals

should protect, To being with,

animals

plays a significant

roles

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in

production

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the production

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of food.

This

because

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we need

animals

and

plants

in order to have

healthy

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diet and helps us build muscles

,

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because

animals

meat consider rich

by

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in

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protein and

plant

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plants

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have vitamins and minerals.

Second

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reason, we need

animals

and

plants

in medical research to trial

a new drugs

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and make sure it safer for humans.

Therefore

,

this

will can contribute to

enhance

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health

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the health

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of

people

and will increase life expectancy.

On the other hand

, I agree with those who argue that there are many

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more improtant

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improtant

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important

issue

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issues

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than

animals

and

plants

.

Firstly

, global warming represents

biggest

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the biggest

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threat to the

live

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life

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in

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on

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the

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earth. To illustrate, global warming and global warming will cause to melting

polar

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of polar

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ice caps and

rasie

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raise

the

tepmperature

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temperature

of

earth

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the earth

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. As

result

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a result

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, we can

epxect

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expect

many

floodings

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and rising

of

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apply

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sea levels.

in other words

,

this

have

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a negative

impacts

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impact

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on

people

,because

this

can make damage

for

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to

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their houses and

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the quailty

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quailty

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quality

of their

live

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lives

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. Regarding

pollution

, contamination from

vechiels

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vehicles

and

industrial

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the industrial

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revolution in all forms namely, air,

nosie

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noise

nose

,

water

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and water

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can have

detrimetnal

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detrimental

consequences

in

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for

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both

animals

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animal's

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and

mankind

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mankind's

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life.

This

is because

pollution

is the main

cuase

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cause

of serious

dieases

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diseases

such

as

,

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cancer, malaria,

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and ebloa

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ebloa

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ebola

. In conclusion, it seems to me that global warming and

pollution

is consider

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is considered

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the

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apply

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more

danger

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dangerous

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issues to the ecosystem than

loss

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the loss

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biodiversity

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of biodiversity

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of animal species and

plants

.