Some species of animals are almost extinct; and many others seem to be fast approaching a similar risk. What are the reasons for this? What should be done to solve this problem?

Nowadays, there is a risk of wild animal extinction and
this
phenomenon seems to be found in other
species
. There are several reasons for
this
issue
such
as because of illegal logging or hunting and trapping wild
animals
for
profit
.
However
, covering bare hills with greenery and checking the shooting license can deal with these problems.
Firstly
, there is no doubt that the number of
animals
has experienced a dramatic decline in recent years. The main reason for
this
unfortunate situation is deforestation. Every year thousands of hectares of forest are being cut down to serve necessary needs and bring more and more
profit
to humans.
Therefore
a huge amount of wild
animals
lost shelter and food sources which made them unable to exist anymore.
Furthermore
, a variety of
species
has been hunted by humans more and more. Because some jewellery or luxury
items
are created by
animals
like faux fur and crocodile leather shoes, these
items
can bring more
profit
and improve economic potential but I believe that they will harm natural and animal
species
all over the world.
Secondly
, to solve deforestation the guard stations need to focus on forest security, and the government can raise taxes and increase fines for illegal logging.
Additionally
, people can replace
items
made with animal skin with environmentally friendly products.
For instance
, Huong Ly a contestant who participated in Miss Universe VietNam 2022, created a prom dress from vinegar with a message of environmental protection and animal production.
Moreover
, checking the shooting license is
also
important to work to protect these
species
. In conclusion, there are various reasons for the risk of the existence of
animals
such
as shooting for
profit
or illegal logging.
Nevertheless
,
this
problem would be solved by some precautions like replacing animal
items
and increasing taxes.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • species extinction
  • endangered animals
  • biodiversity
  • habitat loss
  • deforestation
  • urbanization
  • poaching
  • illegal wildlife trade
  • climate change
  • pollution
  • conservation efforts
  • legislation
  • enforcement
  • human overpopulation
  • sustainable development
  • responsible consumption
  • education
  • awareness programs
  • protected areas
  • wildlife reserves
  • international cooperation
  • collaboration
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