The chart below gives information about how families on one country spent their weekly income 1968 and in 2018.
The bar chart illustrates the statistics about the
families
in the specific country who spent their revenue of themselves per week in 1986 and 2018.
It is clear that
overall
, the feeds and spare times were the main change during this
period of time also
the foods cost with families
dropped off opposite of that the expenditure from
leisure activities with the Change preposition
on
families
was a rise significantly. Furthermore
, household goods were not any
fluctuate between 1986 and 2018.
Correct quantifier usage
apply
According to
these data, the average weekly spending by families
eating was a decline noticeably and stood at just about 15% in 2018. Moreover
, in 2018 the average of cost clothing and footing and personal goods fall off about half of that in 1986 and stood at just about 5% and 4% respectively in 2018.
In addition
, the expenditure of
spare time had more than two-fold until 2018 Change preposition
on
hence
, it climbed up above 22%, Also
this
trend remained in Housing and transport costs so which was
about 18% and 13% respectively.Correct subject-verb agreement
were
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